final short story

The story of the boy who had brown eye blues.

Bryan James is a tall dark and handsome young man with a gorges smile. He’s successful at everything he does, life just come easy to him. He’s the student body president, captain of the football, basketball and lacrosse team. Bryan is also the perfect child his parents just love him. He’s motivated and driven to be the best all around. Every girl falls head over heels in love with him at first sight. They love the music he loves, the food he eats, the way he walks, talks, and even the way he sneezes. Bryans charm is undeniable and everyone knows it.

Like any other day Bryan gets up for school, drives his very expensive car there, parks then walks to class, but on his way there he saw the most beautiful girl he’s ever seen in his life. To anyone else she is just the average nobody on the social latter. She has great grades and plays basketball but she is very shy and keeps to herself. Bryan had to know her; he had to know her name. As he began to approach her the bell rang and she was a swift as the wind walking to class. Bryan could not catch up to her it’s almost as if she disappeared.

The next day at school Bryan ask all his friend about the girl he saw on his way to class but no one knew who she was. Bryan was a part of the “in” crowd, the friends he hung with thought of themselves as superior to everyone outside of their crew. All Bryan could think about was “the girl he saw on his way to class”, that was her name to him amongst other names such as beautiful, lovely, and his favorite brown eyes. When Bryan first saw her what drew him into her were her beautiful brown eyes. They were deep set, almond shaped, and a beautiful deep brown. They glistened in the light and twinkled in his heart as he thought of her.

Bryan was walking to his locker when he saw her again. He knew that it was his chance to talk to her. As he approached her she gave him this questioning look. Bryan started the conversation with a question. He asked her what her name was she replied Brianna. Bryan’s heart almost burst when he heard her name. He thought that their names went beautifully together; Bryan and Brianna. He asked her on a date and she flat out turned him down. Bryan couldn’t believe it. He always got what he wanted. While Bryan was in the middle of asking why, she walked away. He caught up to her to explain how he really wanted to get to know her and then she cut him off saying that she would not be another one of his many girlfriends. This just crushed Bryan, when she walked away again he wanted to follow her, but his feet wouldn’t move.

After Bryans encounter with Brianna he wasn’t the same guy he used to be. He didn’t feel like doing anything but going to his room and listening to music. He was really down. All Bryan could think about was what Brianna said about the girls he talked to. He realized that he did have a lot girlfriend and their relationships didn’t last long. He felt bad and he knew if he really wanted to be with Brianna he would have to change. Bryan decided to change the people he hung out with. He tried being alone for once to see how it would work out. Also, he stopped talking to the girls he was dating; he hoped that Brianna noticed what he was doing for her.

Bryan was driving home from football practice when he saw Brianna walking home. He slowed then pulled over to offer her a ride. Brianna considered saying no but she had just finished basketball practice and her feet hurt so she got in to the car. Bryan was elated. He knew that this was his chance to convince her that he wasn’t a player. After Bryan finished his argument Brianna decided to go on a date with him.

Brianna really liked Bryan but the reason why she rejected him in the beginning was because she was scared that he would treat her wrong. She was nervous for their date she wondered what Bryan had in mind for their date. At around eight Bryan pulled up to her home and knocked on the door. Brianna came out it a beautiful cream dress, matching shoes, and her grandmother’s pearls. Bryan was amazed at her he always thought she was beautiful but this just topped her beauty off. Bryan took her to the hottest restaurant in town called “Hibachi” for a nice dinner then to the play “What I’ve given” which was sold out for weeks. After their date Bryan asked Brianna to be his girlfriend. As Bryan anticipated Brianna’s answer his hands were sweating and his heart was pounding when she said yes he was so happy and relieved. Ever since Bryan and Brianna’s first date they’ve been happy to together ever since and Bryan no longer had the brown eye blues; he had her in his arms.